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Thursday, June 30, 2011

Narrative scene without punctuation

It was a very hot day such that not even a leaf stirred and Tom was perspiring profusely that big droplets of sweat trickled down his side chin but at the same time a sturdy looking man approached him with big strides and at such a tremendous speed that Tom was taken aback as thousands of wild thoughts raced through his mind causing him to stand rooted to the ground as if roots had sprouted from his ankle while the man slowly closed up the gap between him and Tom and in the end gave Tom a shove at the shoulders that Tom fell to the ground with a loud thud !

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