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Friday, February 26, 2010

The lady,or the tiger?


The answer:The tiger

Without the slightest hesitation,he went to the door on the right,and opened it.At that heart-stopping moment everyone hold their breath,some even muttered a silent prayer for the handsome man to be alive.The door opened,and the shadows of the living thing in the room shone on the ground.The man dared not looked up,instead looking at the shadow.The shadow of the living thing shows a small body and head.

"A woman,yes!"The man shouted but his happiness only lasted for a while.For what greeted him when he looked up confidently was not a pretty lady.It was a tiger to his surprise and fear.The tiger was small compared to those adult tiger.Even so,its fangs was longer and much much more sharper than any tiger's.It's hostile eyes glared at the man,who was now beyond description.The man's fear,horror,disappointment was not able to be described by words alone.His heart palpitated at such at amazing speed that he would not have been surprised if he would die of heart attack first.The cold and clammy hands of him trembled tremendously.

With a swift and powerful plunge,the man was pinned down to the ground with immense force.The tiger was too agile,fast and strong despite his size.With a few painful bites by the ferocious tiger,the man finished his last breath.The audience closed their eyes,too afraid and demoralized to watch the violent scene.Everyone leaved the amphitheatre after minutes,with heavy steps.And that's the end of the princess's lover,died in a gruesome way.

The princess returned to the palace and closed herself up in her room.She took out the knife from the elegant drawer and pointed it to her wrist.Without second thoughts,she cut it through her wrist,blood dripping from it.She muttered her last words,"I'm coming to you,my lover..."

The End

2 comments:

  1. I find your story more outstanding, because there is unccertainty, and I was kept in suspense.
    When the man opened the door, you did not give away the answer immediately, you wrote about everybody's reaction, and the tiger did not rush out immediately. Speaking about the tiger, it reflected that the King's orders are effective, and the most ferocious tiger is chosen, what's more, it is small and outstanding! A good ending indeed!

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  2. you are way better than me in everything. How do you do that?Anyway, you should be an author, you rock at it

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