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Thursday, July 29, 2010

Poem Analysis-Snapshotland

Step 2
Things that the title suggests to me:
-An island
-Involving guns
-Cameras
-Photo-taking
-Catapult
-Killing

Step 4
The poem focuses on the happy atmosphere in the beach,and that the people in the photos are enjoying themselves tremendously.
Interesting phrases:permanent delight of passengers,pleasure-boat,promised land,nobody dies,happy all the time,buckets in crisp,gingham pinafores,bonnets on the sea-shore,smile and smile and smile.

Step 5
Metaphors:NIL
Similes:NIL
Personification:smooth sand,pleasure boat,old-fashioned gardens
Alliteration:The and Time,Smooth and sand,Sun and Shine,Stop and Smiling,sandboys and sandgirls and sepia.
Assonance:Lavender and Ever,Right and Sight.
Onomatopoeia:NIL
Symbolism:The vacation at the beach symbolises happiness and relaxing mood.The sepia photo symbolises aging and also tradition.

Step 6
"Smooth sand","sun shines all day long","sandboys and sandgirls","on the sea-shore" and "on the beach" all suggest that the location is on a beach.

Step 7
They all describe the settings of the location.

Step 8
The poem may be talking about photos that are taken at a beach as proved by the dolphins and boat at the sea.It proves that the poet is writing about photos as everything freezes,does not move and never dies.
Step 9
a)An unidentified speaker.
b)It's for those people that appreciate photos and understand the importance of them.
c)It's very carefree,relaxing and soothing.
d)He is being very friendly and open to the audiences.
e)The poem is organised in this way such that a stanza describes and focus on one theme,for example the third stanza is describing about delightment of lovers.
f)It is to help in the description of the importance and the characteristic of photos.

Step 10
The poet is trying to encourage people to appreciate photos that are taken as they can bring to us happiness when we look at the photos.It also encourage people to take good care of our photos as they could bring us fond memories and it can last forever.

Saturday, July 24, 2010

Limericks

There was once a man from Boston
whose mind was being flatten
he went into a stable
and told the horses a fable
and end up being beaten

By:Sheng Xiang ^^

Monday, July 19, 2010

Sound-poem

I heard the owls hooting in the dark.
I heard the sheep bleating beyond the hill.
I heard the wolves howl in the jungle.
I heard the dogs barking when I came home.
I heard the cats purring when she received food from me.
I heard the frogs croaking in the night.
I heard the bees buzzing among the flowers.
I heard the ducks quack in the pond.
I heard the roosters crowed in the morning.
I heard the pigs oink in the farm.
I heard the cows moo in the farm.
I heard the pigeons cooing on the trees.

By :Sheng Xiang

Friday, July 16, 2010

Poem on Life

Life is a wrestling match,
tiring and hard.
You strive for all you could,
but the results never show.
Your body wanted to give up,
but your mind refuses.

Again and again your opponent knocks you down,
again and again you recovered.
It was when it struck you,
your efforts,sweat,blood and pain,
forever stained.
You persevered all the way,
summoning all your strength of the day.

With determination and the courage,
you became the winner
once again.
Thinking back now and then,
your face covered
with the tears.
You told yourself that you had done your best,
Looking towards the future.

The day you died,
the story ends.
You gave a pat
on your shoulders,
telling yourself
that's a wonderful match.

By :Sheng Xiang :)